Wednesday, November 21, 2007

sunrise
the clank of radiators
in an old building

3 comments:

Annie Jeffries said...

I haven't heard this sound, let alone thought about it, for a long long time. Made me smile.

jem said...

This is a familiar thought - the creak of metal warming up, followed by the creak of bones trying to do the same.

Area 17 said...

I love the juxtaposition, and an internal metaphor in itself! ;-)