slowly waving
under the starry sky
the conifers
suddenly -
the snapped crack
before the short silence
and long
and slow
the rent of wooden flesh
daylight reveals
the fallen comrades
on the battlefield
Thursday, January 24, 2008
Blustery night in the Vienna Woods
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I love the way this built up - scenes and sounds and images. Very well done.
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