Saturday, January 12, 2008

our anniversary...
the surface of snow
not yet broken

January storm
knots in the chain
of our anniversary necklace


John McDonald said...

very evocative couple of haiku

jem said...

I like the way you have crafted strong images, that allow outsiders a better understanding of your day.

Jim Tantillo said...

both are great, but the second one especially sticks with me. nice haiku!

Pearl said...

Lovely esp. the second one. Wonderful juxtoposition.