Saturday, January 12, 2008

our anniversary...
the surface of snow
not yet broken

January storm
knots in the chain
of our anniversary necklace

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

very evocative couple of haiku
john

jem said...

I like the way you have crafted strong images, that allow outsiders a better understanding of your day.

Jim Tantillo said...

both are great, but the second one especially sticks with me. nice haiku!

Pearl said...

Lovely esp. the second one. Wonderful juxtoposition.