Monday, January 14, 2008

Crisp Morning

chilly morning-
frozen spikes of grass
waving in the wind

Posted by Reihaisha at 1:06 PM

1 comment:

Jim Tantillo said...

Reihaisha,
I've really been thinking about this one all week. Not sure if people think it works or not--can the frozen spikes of grass actually wave in the wind? my image is of ice cracking in the wind. But the frozen spikes of grass image is terrific. how about:

chilly morning -
frozen spikes of grass stand
stiff in the wind

January 22, 2008 at 1:10 PM

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