Tuesday, January 1, 2008

the drunk -
dancing
to silent music

3 comments:

Sandy said...

So, you were watching me dance. ;)

Very nice haiku, John.

Area 17 said...

I love it!

Here's one I 'made earlier'! ;-)

beer forgotten
the drunk looks deep
within his shoe


Beer Haiku Daily:
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Tinywords 2004-01-21:
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Runner up, Snapshot Press 2003 Haiku Calendar Competition

jem said...

This is perfect, so simple but so apt. You capture all things drink related so well!