Winter Haiku 2007

Saturday, January 12, 2008

our anniversary...
the surface of snow
not yet broken

January storm
knots in the chain
of our anniversary necklace

John McDonald said...: very evocative couple of haiku
john; January 12, 2008 at 12:26 PM
jem said...: I like the way you have crafted strong images, that allow outsiders a better understanding of your day.; January 13, 2008 at 6:41 AM
Jim Tantillo said...: both are great, but the second one especially sticks with me. nice haiku!; January 13, 2008 at 6:50 AM
Pearl said...: Lovely esp. the second one. Wonderful juxtoposition.; January 16, 2008 at 8:24 AM